Sue : A day in your life seems very hectic, more power to you. I Liked your piece very much you told a very good story and I enjoyed it. I like the transitions you used they were very smooth and the paper was very well put together. I think you have the concept of what a narrative should be in the bag. Good Job!!
Grade: A
Jacob Grimes : I really enjoyed your paper it was a really good read. I mean come on I download music to see if I like the album but I always go out and support the band!!! I liked the flow of the paper and I really enjoyed the way you lead us in right from the beginning. I think you nailed the true meaning of a narrative! I really liked it.
Grade: A